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stpchar:2016

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Finally finished. Took me long enough. I think I need a new iPad, since my Mini 1st gen can't export the video for it. :(
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Before I talk about what I don't like, I'll mention the things that I do like.
I love the type of shading in the drawing where shadows are created by contrasting colors. The colors are bright and pleasant to look at although lacking in variety. The subtle textures and details in the background are and foreground are also a nice addition. The body is drawn very well, no complaints there.

However, some critiques on the artwork would be the shape of the face, lack of colors, mouth and nose. I think the face looks a little bit too long and disproportionate and it seems to be missing the back portion of the head. The color scheme is limited to just cyan and black so it would be nice to add some more vibrant colors like yellow, red, or bright green. The mouth isn't aligned with the face and the nose is too pointy for my liking.